Sunday, April 27, 2014

Synthesis Essay

            Although for many people the American Dream, and the idea of social mobility, may seem nonexistent, I believe that it is still a thriving part of today’s society. In order to argue for or against this notion, however, it is necessary to first define what is meant by the American Dream. Contrary to what some people seem to think, the American Dream is NOT that if you will become automatically become rich if you work hard. In the words of Nicole Doñe, whose parents were immigrants, “…this American dream is an interpretation of a white poor man’s dream.” The American Dream is simply the following: the opportunity for anyone to rise upward in social class through perseverance and hard work. The key word in this sentence is opportunity. If that word is taken out, then the American Dream’s identity becomes something very different. It becomes the idea that if you work hard, you WILL become rich, but this is not correct. You simply must have the chance to rise up in social class; just because you don’t does not mean that the American Dream is fading. Having made this clarification, I deem the American Dream alive based on the following facts—social mobility is prominent and not at all diminishing, and rising gaps in class don’t impact the American Dream.

            Despite a number of people pointing toward social mobility decreasing, I would argue the exact opposite. After reading the arguments surrounding the notion, it is clear to me that they have little pertinent evidence supporting them. For example, in an article titled “Social Mobility in America: Repairing the Rungs”, the author states, “Back in Horatio Alger days, America was more fluid than Europe. Now it is not. Using one-generation measures of social mobility-how much a father’s relative income influences that of his adult son- America does half as well as Nordic Countries”. While at first this seems like a strong point, the author provides no evidence to support his comment, nor does he explain how he determined social mobility in the days of Horatio Alger. Instead of showing the reader why his statement was valid, he quickly moves on to the next part of his argument, talking about how the gap between test scores of the rich and poor have increased. In doing so, he completely abandons his argument that social mobility is decreasing, leaving its only support with the aforementioned vague, meaningless statement.

            Another way people who think social mobility is decreasing argue their point is through the use of specific examples. This strategy is shot down by Jonah Goldberg in his article “Economic Mobility is Determined by Personal Choice”. In the article, he shows how opponents of the American Dream warp facts so that they seemingly support their opinion. In the article he cites one study that talked about decreasing chances of upward mobility in the middle class—specifically saying that 50% of people born in the middle class either stay where they are or move down in income level. The study then uses the example of two women who became history teachers and shows how their income had decreased a great deal in comparison to their parents. Goldberg digs deeper into these examples, however, and finds the following, “In both instances, Hartman (the author of the study) profiles women whose fathers were doctors but the women themselves opted to pursue PhDs in history with the aim of teaching…and we’re supposed to be surprised they make less than their parents?” Later in the article Goldberg highlights a major problem within the argument that social mobility is decreasing—it doesn’t reflect personal choice. This is a point that can’t be ignored, since choice, while a hidden and unmeasured statistic, is perhaps the most important statistic to consider. How can we know how many people have decreased incomes from their parents simply because they preferred teaching to being a doctor? It could be that it is this “choice” statistic is actually the one that is on the rise, not decreasing social mobility.

            On the other hand, there is actually a good deal of evidence supporting increased social mobility. An example of this can be found in the Pursuing the American Dream: Economic Mobility Across Generations report. In this report, two graphs are shown, which both support increasing social mobility. In one graph, family incomes are compared between generations. In this graph, ALL income groups are shown, on average, to exceed their parent’s income. One fact that I found especially interesting was that 93% of people in the bottom percentile had family incomes greater than their parents. As for the second graph, it breaks down each economic quintile and shows where people ended up in relation to where they began. For example, one statistic that is shown is that 57% of people who were born into the bottom quintile ended up in the second quintile or higher. In the second quintile, 51% of people ended up in a higher quintile as an adult. These graphs clearly show that the opportunities to increase in social class are present for a majority of people. If this doesn’t support the notion that the American Dream is well and alive I don’t know what does.

            The other central argument to my case is that rising gaps in class don’t have an impact on the American Dream. This concept takes far less explanation and fact than the argument of social mobility. As I have stated, the American Dream is nothing more than the ability to increase one’s lifestyle/social class through hard work and perseverance. It says absolutely nothing about how large the gaps between the classes are. As long as social mobility is a tangible and present force, then gaps in classes do not matter. As stated by Yasmina Shaush on National Public Radio,
            “Regardless of birthplace, 310 million Americans face the same expectation. To be born in America is a gift, one that should never be wasted. Even through today’s pessimistic climate, I find it easy to be optimistic, simply because of where I live. While my mother grew up in the shadows of             communism, I was raised in the light of freedom and democracy. Anything is possible in America, anything.”
This excerpt from Shaush sums up this argument perfectly. She hits on the head the idea that the American Dream is alive because no matter what, people can still become the best they can be. There is no dictating government restricting them, nor an inherent set of boundaries that contain them.

            Keeping both of these fundamental ideas in mind—that social mobility is prominent and well, and gaps in class have no effect on the American Dream-- it is clear to me that the American Dream is far from gone.

            

1 comment:

  1. I completely agree with this sentence: "The American Dream is simply the following: the opportunity for anyone to rise upward in social class through perseverance and hard work." I like how you redefined what many people assume the American dream to be, and pointed out instances where people have twisted the truth in order to fit the point they're trying to make. However, I think that inflation/the general rising of prices has to be taken into account when looking at what children earn compared to what their parents earn. Other than that, I think you make several valid points throughout this essay.

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